ANZAC Writing

WALT Write a diary entry using specific vocabulary.

I learned how to make my story more interesting here are my two best sentences.
Today we made 15 trips up and down that steep horrible valley fearing for our lives  as the enemy closed in.
One of the jobs is to clean the toilets another is to keep night watch.

I achieved my goal because I thought I used a lot of vocabulary.

Next time I will try my best to do much longer sentences.

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